Room 2 has been learning about how to format dialogue in a story. We watched the video, Death Buy Lemonade and then wrote our story from the point of view of one of the characters in the video. We hope you enjoy our writing. 🙂

Death Buy Lemonade from Cartoon Brew on Vimeo.

I was asleep and I saw a thirsty dude come out of nowhere.

I was watching go to a little girl for a drink.

She said ” NO!” She saw him die right in front of her.

I came down looking for the body and I didn’t know

I landed on him. I was about to take the thirsty

mans body . When the little girl pulled

my coat and said ,” Hey you, buy a cup

of lemonade”.She wouldn’t go away

so I said “DIE” and I clapped

and she died. I went and took the body.

Poof I was gone.

It was the day before yesterday when I thought I would drive out to a corn field to pick some corn.

I didn’t really want to go alone so I called my mum and asked her if she would like to go with me to pick some corn.  She said ” Your old enough to go by yourself, but no because Im busy!”

So there I was driving to the corn field.  When I got there I got out and locked the car, then off I went to pick corn.  The dumb thing was that I didn’t bring a sack or a bag to put the corn in.

I was already  in the corn field and i panicked because I was lost.

I was so thirsty the only way i could get around was lying on my stomache and pulling myself with my arms.

Finally O saw the road in that distanceI saw a lemonade stand.

There it was this little girl selling lemonade. I reached out to grab a glass and she pulled the glasses filled with lemonade back. She stared to point at the 10 cents sign.

Here I was thinking to myself , ” Here I am dying from thirst and I dont’t have any money. Just give me one glass it’s only 10 cents……….,.

DEAD!!!

      The Devil said “Someone has died Death I’ll let you go down as long as you don’t talk to that Peter Griffen ok?”So down Death went.

      Death thought “Where is he? ” as he scratched his head. When he looked under him, he saw that he was standing on him.

       “How dumb am I” , thought Death. So he lifted him up and there was a lemonade stand behind him and he fell on tipping all the drinks over. The girl was furious she stormed up to him and pulled his black cloak and pointed at the 10c sign.

Death thought “What”, then she held up five fingers.

She said “Dude you owe me 50c”, and Death didn’t understand English.

One hot sunny day I was sitting in a corn field selling lemonade at my lemonade stand. While I was waiting for someone to come I was reading the news paper.

All of a sudden I heard a weird noise,”chh chh.” It came again.

“chh chh chh chh.”

I pulled my news paper away from my face and there right in front of me was a man puling himself across the ground.When he looked and saw that I was looking at him he said,”please give me a glass of lemonade I’m dyeing.”

“No.” I said.

Then all of a sudden he died. The sky went black and a man came down. His name was Death. Death started to look for the man but he could not find him. He finally noticed that he was standing on the dead man. He picked him up and fell backwards . He knocked my lemonade stand. I was so ANGRY. I got up and went and grabbed his coat.

He said, “Let go!”

I said,”No! I want uhh oh yeah 50 cents.”

Death said, “No.”

He hit me and I died.

I was dead forever.

My name is death and this is what happened.One cloudy day  I was looking for a fresh dead body. What I didn’t know was that  I was on top of a dead guy. I got off him and lifted him up, but he was so fat he must weighed a ton. I said, “Holy blazers! He is heavy.” I kind of tripped back, but bumped into something.Thank goodness. I was just about to take off until something caught my cloak. It was a girl. She looked angry she pointed at the lemonade stand. I scratched my head,thinking, “What the h.e.l.l!” I thought, “She was giving a high five.” I gave her a high five. Now I have two dead fresh bodies what a lucky day.

THE END OR IS IT?

I was sitting at my lemonade stand   minding my own business  waiting  for  a customer to try my lemonade my mum made  yesterday when suddenly, scratch! scratch!  Something was coming through the bushes . It was a man. A very old , thirsty man trying to get my lemonade. Well trying  but  i didn’t care how old or thirsty he was. He could clearly see in big letters there was  10c  written below lemonade .

” Thirsty i am thirsty, ” said the old man. Next minute , splat! He was on the ground like  completely still on the ground. He was dead. Just then a whole dramatic thing  happened. A freakish guy was standing on the dead guy.

“Oh, ” said the grim reaper picking up the dead guy.

He spilt my lemonade. I tugged his cote and said you owe me 50c. Then he killed me.

I was sitting by my lemonade stand minding my own business waiting for someone to by my fresh homemade lemonade. Suddenly I heard a noise, “Eak eak.” Then out of nowhere came an old man who was dieing of thirstiness. When he tried to grab a glass of lemonade I  moved it back a little. The next minute POOF he was dead. After that a grimm reaper  came down from heavean , picked up the guy and knocked over my lemonade. So I got up and tugged on the grimm reapers suit. I got fisty with him and said, “you need to pay me 50 cents.”

He replied,”NO !”

I held my hand up and he high fived me and I died. 🙂

One sunny day I made a lemonade stand then out of the wheat farm a man came crawling to the stand for lemonade.

The thirsty old man cried for lemonade, ” LEMONADE “

I said , ”  NO you have to pay 10 cents for a glass ” I tapped on the 10 cent board.

The old man paused and stared , then suddenly died of de-hydration.

BOOM! CRASH! THUD!

Death came to collect the man 

Death walked straight into my lemonade!

” HEY MISTER ” I yelled .

“what? ” Death asked .

” YOU KNOCKED MY LEMONADE ” I screamed .

” SO….” he shrugged .

” so you pay me pack ” I said .

I put my hand out for my money SLAP! he gave me a high five and I died.

The last thing I said was , ” I just wanted to go to the dairy “

I was sitting in my lounge watching T.V.

Suddenly I sense a death. So I go down to earth and I say, ” Hey, Where’s the dead guy? … oh he’s right under me.”

So I, Death picked him up and I carried him on my shoulder and bumped into this little girl’s lemonade stand knocking over all the lemonade by accident.

The girl got angry. I was about to go back to the death place, but the girl held me back.

”Hey, Whats tthe big idea?” I said.

”You knocked, lets see, one,two,three,four, FIVE glasses of lemonade so you have to pay for ALL of them!” She said that too fast so I didn’t know what she said and she held her hand up. I think she wanted a high five. I high five her.

”Oops, she’s dead.” I say. ”Oh man! Now I have to carry TWO people now Dang it”

The End